Welcome to my learning portfolio. I go to Burnham School - Te Kura o Tiori. This portfolio shows some of the work I am most proud of. Please join me and give me some positive feedback.
Wednesday, 25 September 2013
Cavemen
I was walking in the forest then I, walked past a cave. In the cave
I saw a bright light in the cave. Some cavemen were lighting a fire.
It was so bright that it lit the whole entire cave. Then I noticed that they we're writing on the wall.It was amazing I said out l loud then the cavemen saw me. I thought they we're going to eat me up.But I became one of them.And I became their queen I lived for 100000 years. THE END
I was walking in the forest then I,walked past a cave in the cave
I saw cavemen and i saw a bright light in the cave. The cave men
were lghting a fire.
It was so bright that it lit the whole entire cave. Then i noticed that
There was writing on the wall. It was a mazing, out lade I said.
Then the cavemen saw me,
I thought they were going eat me up. But I be came one of them.
And I be came their queen. I lived for 1000000000000000
Years.
I saw cavemen and i saw a bright light in the cave. The cave men
were lghting a fire.
It was so bright that it lit the whole entire cave. Then i noticed that
There was writing on the wall. It was a mazing, out lade I said.
Then the cavemen saw me,
I thought they were going eat me up. But I be came one of them.
And I be came their queen. I lived for 1000000000000000
Years.
Tuesday, 17 September 2013
By milla.
On Tuesday the night mare of burnham happened. The wind was
Like a lion roaring.
It's bein 40 yeas sice it happened.
Explaied Dan the storm had no warning.
On Tuesday the night mare of burnham happened. The wind was
Like a lion roaring.
It's bein 40 yeas sice it happened.
Explaied Dan the storm had no warning.
Monday, 2 September 2013
Cultural Festival
When I got to school we got to play, then all the girls had to
Go to room 8, and the boys went to the holl.
We went on the bus, then I felt sick on the bus, I had to go
In miss Sheppard car. Then we were at the C Bs arena we beat burnham.
We waited and waited and then we headed in -
side we were first then we were on stage.
We sang for 8
Minutes.
The rest of the dynamites then the show was
Finished. We had Mc Donald's for a snack then we went home.
Go to room 8, and the boys went to the holl.
We went on the bus, then I felt sick on the bus, I had to go
In miss Sheppard car. Then we were at the C Bs arena we beat burnham.
We waited and waited and then we headed in -
side we were first then we were on stage.
We sang for 8
Minutes.
The rest of the dynamites then the show was
Finished. We had Mc Donald's for a snack then we went home.
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